Re: The Liberation of Tamarr
 

I'll post feedback on the story when I read it later today. http://forum.shrapnelgames.com/images/icons/icon7.gif I'll just edit this post to do it as well.

Ok, well I read the two new chapters. I would have to say nice job RD! I certainly like the action you have going and how everything is developing. Everyone else covered the other areas that I thought of so I will leave it at that. Nice job once again.

[ June 09, 2003, 20:03: Message edited by: Ragnarok ]

Re: The Liberation of Tamarr
 

As usual, nice work! Vivid. http://forum.shrapnelgames.com/images/icons/icon6.gif

I do agree that the scope of your tale seems somewhat grand... I like to hear that you are tying things back in that you originally introduced.
I'll be patient of course. http://forum.shrapnelgames.com/images/icons/icon7.gif

Out of curiousity, do you have an idea about the size of your story? For instance, would you classify it best as a short story, novellette, grand tale, etc.? Or are you writing this more from a free flow as the ideas come to you to paint the picture, and are uncertain about the scope as of yet?

Re: The Liberation of Tamarr
 

Well i have some plot ideas but those are for later on. I'm currently just writing events from the Last year of Tamarrian space travel. Now that i have the new main character introduced things will become a little more organised i assure you http://forum.shrapnelgames.com/images/icons/icon12.gif I only put the intel sabotage in just for a little twist http://forum.shrapnelgames.com/images/icons/icon7.gif As for size i have a feeling it could end up being a long story, and i have a lot of spare time coming up so i can see this story growing to be more than a Short Story!

Thanks for the feedback, and dogscoff, any criticisms are welcome! http://forum.shrapnelgames.com/images/icons/tongue.gif

Re: The Liberation of Tamarr
 

I finally found the time to read your story. Good going RD, I like your descriptions. Am curious to see how this will turn out.