The Cleansing
 

I have written the first chapter of the saga that is the New Age.

I hope that you can take the time to read it.

Comments are welcome.

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New Age Ship Yards

"We've made too many compromises already, too many retreats! They invade our space and we fall back -- they assimilate entire worlds and we fall back! Not again! The line must be drawn here -- this far, no further! And I will make them pay for what they've done!" -- Captain Picard STNG

Borg Breen Species 8472 Cardassian Dominion STNG Ferengi Klingon Romulan
Trek Movie era TOS Illuminati Starwolf Rogue Fleet

Re: The Cleansing
 

Very nice read. Not sure about the name for a race. Other then that, It was quite injoyable.

Re: The Cleansing
 

Thanks. http://www.shrapnelgames.com/ubb/images/icons/icon7.gif The Cleansing term will be explained over time as many of the races in the galaxy (the races that I have compiled) do not know who or what or more importantly why they were attacked by the Cleansing.

The story is the back ground universal saga by which the races I have compiled now live and exsist in.

Re: The Cleansing
 

AH! A mystery race. Very good.

Re: The Cleansing
 

I feel that the premis is good as it provides the reason why all the races, including the Borg, have low tech and no planets. http://www.shrapnelgames.com/ubb/images/icons/icon7.gif

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New Age Ship Yards

"We've made too many compromises already, too many retreats! They invade our space and we fall back -- they assimilate entire worlds and we fall back! Not again! The line must be drawn here -- this far, no further! And I will make them pay for what they've done!" -- Captain Picard STNG

Borg Breen Species 8472 Cardassian Dominion STNG Ferengi Klingon Romulan
Trek Movie era TOS Illuminati Starwolf Rogue Fleet