Ruatha, *
LOL* First the stories are 'Great'. Second, try to make them smaller pieces. I know that one isn't easy. But you will get more people to follow the story, if they don't feel like they are reading a novel. Just a thought. And I did make the same suggestion to 'Atrocities'. Third, there is nothing wrong with your style. It is 'Your Style' after all. Fourth, I have enjoyed the stories! Keep it up.
mlmbd 
