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Old February 21st, 2003, 08:04 PM
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Default Re: Newbie Galactic Combat II - Story Thread

Hi Tbontob.
The real reason I killed of Ruatha is quite simple.
In my single player Games I always called my race's leaders for Ruatha.
When I started Newbie Galactic Combat I for some reason didn't.
When I started writing I didn't think of this but then I started getting in-game Messages adressed to Matriarch Elyssandra.
So I had no option but to change leader someway to make the game and the story consistent.

I'm planning on developing Elyssandra some and Thurya more. So from now on Thruya is the real "main" character.
I don't know why I suddenly stand with alot of female characters and a shortage of male ones.
And I hope the "Respodner" doesn't get killed in the coming combats. Their first combat was a small one and a victory. More on that in next episode though. But I suspect there will be lots of battles in the future, now that I'm at war.

About your story.
I do find it amusing.
I really liked their addiction/fear of bubblebaths! (I actually laughed for real when reading it!)
Some elements though I belive are too obvious, as to what will happen I mean. But I'm not sure (Thinking of the future death of a certain official who is spending alot of money...) if I'm right though??
My favorite name is Loy Al tew deBone, I would like it if he proved to be a traitor, but on the other hand that would also be too obvious!
And will the reverse engine tech lead to something ? I can't wait for this revolutionary tech to be finished!

As to CaptRR.

Who planted the Nuke??
Who is controlling that device??
You're building a real mystery here....
Tension is arising!

I check the thread both here and at the Game forum each day to see if anyone of you have posted a new episode!
I still hope someone else will come along aswell.
It would be fun reading the thoughts of the Ghouls for example, as I'm having alot of trouble with them at current.

[ February 21, 2003, 23:08: Message edited by: Ruatha ]
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