May 24th, 2003, 03:45 PM
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Join Date: May 2002
Location: Linghem, Östergötland, Sweden
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Re: Once Upon The Stars (Updated 07-04-04)
Great as usual.
Just one critisism, exchange women to woman, it makes it easier to understand the story.
(nitpicking from my part!)
[ May 24, 2003, 14:46: Message edited by: Ruatha ]
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