Atrocities, your story just keeps getting better. I enjoy it and I do not see where you made any major mistakes that takes away from the story. Glad you added more to it and since you did it has given me background story ideas for the Mod I am helping with
The Galactic Conquest Mod.
I am sure you recall my email about this Mod. I want to ask again if I may use some of your story ideas with our own background story?
You have a genuine talent for writing dude.
