[dogscoff]

Enjoying it thouroghly, especially the planetside action - I always enjoy descriptions of alien planets and cultures, and yours is particularly vivd.

As for the intel attack: Yeah, good stuff. THere are a few writing-style things I noticed, but I assume you're looking more for comment on the story. I like the way you've focussed on one of SE4's less prominent aspects (intel) - more ppl shoould do this.

I have to say the whole story is kind of scattered - I get the feeling you didn't plan it much, or that you didn't stick to the plans you made. You're pulling it back together though, so I'll just shut up and keep reading=-)