I'll post feedback on the story when I read it later today.
I'll just edit this post to do it as well.
Ok, well I read the two new chapters. I would have to say nice job RD! I certainly like the action you have going and how everything is developing. Everyone else covered the other areas that I thought of so I will leave it at that. Nice job once again.
[ June 09, 2003, 20:03: Message edited by: Ragnarok ]
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Hevordian Story Thread
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I think...therefore I am confused.
They were armed. With guns, said Omari.
Canadians. With guns. And a warship. What is this world coming to?
The dreaded derelict dwelling two ton devil bunny!
Every ship can be a minesweeper... Once