[Fyron]

- I'd add a link to part II at the end of part I (page 4).

The link at the beginning isn't enough? Will do.

- The footnotes on page 2, part I are sort of silly, you can cut them out if you want (not the others).

Ok.

- The Last note in the Appendix (month/tenth) is also not necessary, I'd remove it.

Ok.

- One of the Posts in part II has a note at the bottom (2404.5, I think) which should be removed, it bears no relation to the story itself.

Ok.

And two questions : part II will have no 'pages', it'll just be one long sequence ?

Actually, I had not added page breaks because I was testing just how much text I could put in each section. And then I went to bed.

Also, why not '(c) the author, used with permission' ?

I have not figured out where that text comes from.

Edit:
It is in the language files. I can make it say that in English, but not in the other Languages (as I do not know how to say that in them ).

[ August 08, 2003, 19:34: Message edited by: Imperator Fyron ]