[Raging Deadstar]

Originally posted by clark:
With that, the world went black, and Dr. Hunter politely passed out.

I loved that little end bit, politely passed out

This story is great, a very nice start, fluent to read and leaves little hints at things. All the things needed to make it a great addition to SEIV Fanfiction! I enjoyed these chapters, and i like the idea of these emperors and emperess being very powerful, which must give you a lot of freedom to roleplay the game.

I better finish the next chapter of my story, i'm glad it isn't like a competition on this board or i'd be doomed