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Old June 19th, 2003, 11:35 PM

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Default Re: The Trillian Empire

I edited the sublight Suicide, good eyes.

I am trying to hold off untill I have a bit more time to do the next installment- I feel the pacing of the story is a little too quick, and so it undermines the effect.

How long is too long (a story chapter)? Or is there such a thing?

[ June 19, 2003, 22:46: Message edited by: clark ]
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