BeeDee,
You said,
quote:
Later on I guess I'll try to turn it into something less like a list of events and more like an actual story.
This is just one reader's opinion, but I like it the way it is. It kind of fits with the mechanoid race.
I kept reading this and thinking, "This could be how the Borg race got started."
Very well done BeeDee.
More please sir.
Geoschmo