Thread
:
OT: Story Snippet
View Single Post
#
2
April 7th, 2004, 11:31 AM
dogscoff
General
Join Date: Mar 2001
Location: UK
Posts: 4,245
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Re: OT: Story Snippet
SOunds like you have some good action going on there. It's a bit confusing out of context though- It's hard to tell which metal-clad figure is which. Maybe you should differentiate them somehow (one taller/ fatter/ different coloured armour/ different voice or something)
Of course they might be robots, built exactly the same...
__________________
<img src=http://www.dogscoff.co.uk/images/dogscoffbanner1.gif alt= - /]
Dogscoff: Pixels for hire:
A Se++ GdY $ Fr- C- Css Sf Ai++ M+ MpR S++ Ss+++ RV Pw Fq+ Nd++++ Rp+ G- Mm+++ Bb++++@ Au+MO
:
Tested positive for anarcho-syndicalism
dogscoff
View Public Profile
Send a private message to dogscoff
Visit dogscoff's homepage!
Find all posts by dogscoff