April 7th, 2004, 08:30 PM
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Re: OT: Story Snippet
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Originally posted by UseOfWeps:
Various words spelled 'creatively' - necessary, fidget, interrupting, emanated etc. Of course, in the spirit of all grammar Posts, I've probably made some mistakes in this post too. 
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I have know spell checker.
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A good start, but the dialog is a bit confusing.
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You mean, as to who is saying what in the beginning? I'm trying to keep the villian parts a bit vague, but the introductory peice for them clears up who's who.
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