Re: Once Upon The Stars (Updated 08-22-04)
I took the advise of many and hopefully it will pay off. The first chapter is about 10,500 words and the second is close to 9,000 words.
My biggest issue is with grammer. I tell you I wish I could aford to have a professional proof reader go through the finished story and help fix all my mistakes.
And thanks DS, I hope you enjoy the latest two chapters.
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