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Old August 23rd, 2004, 08:00 AM

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Default Re: Once Upon The Stars (Updated 08-22-04)

Hey Atrocities, I've been meaning to reread this story, I'm just curious if you started it again or something... It's a bit confusing. Is the first chapter still the first chapter?

Help out my poor confuzzled mind and I'll try and get through this collossal piece.

Edit: As for Grammar, I'm not the best at it but when you send me the revised chapters for SpaceEmpires.Net I can have a look through them for you and send back any bits that make no sense

Edit 2: Ahh, I missed that! It seems you Just Sent me the Revised Chapter
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