Hey Atrocities, I've been meaning to reread this story, I'm just curious if you started it again or something... It's a bit confusing. Is the first chapter still the first chapter?
Help out my poor confuzzled mind and I'll try and get through this collossal piece.
Edit: As for Grammar, I'm not the best at it but when you send me the revised chapters for SpaceEmpires.Net I can have a look through them for you and send back any bits that make no sense
Edit 2: Ahh, I missed that! It seems you Just Sent me the Revised Chapter