[PvK]

I mostly agree with the others' comments. MR should be 18 unless there is a thematic reason it should be lower than all other pretenders. Prot 25 is rather high - the 100 HP will make him plenty tough, so as Pickles said, I'd lower prot to more like 10, no higher than 15, and removing the body slot is probably appropriate, but perhaps not necessary. I would tend to compare to Red Dragon and Cyclops, looking at the dragon breath attack, hitpoints, protection, attack skill, precision, slots, and point cost.

In general it looks pretty good, though, IMO.

PvK