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The Maintenance Aptitude trait makes more sense now. Instead of reducing the base maintenance rate, it now reduces the actual maintenance paid. A characteristic of 110% actually reduces ship maintenance rates by 10%, not the bizarre 40% as in stock.
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You know, it's advertizing, not tech reference. Too long and sophisticated (it's considered by default that target group is not as advanced as you). I don't have a ready-to-use Version, but try to make it compact and easy understandable.
Also. What you really need is SLOGAN. And emblem, probably ...
.... uh, sorry, learned too much marketing for exams this week.
