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thanks, and yes I have thought of writing a book which is actually why I'm writing these stories.
I'm hoping I can get enough practice so that when I do write a book it won't have as many gramatical errors as this story. And so I can learn character development and flow of writing.
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You know that I would be happy to proof read your work (not like I've done that before)
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As for Characters some of their personalities are based on folks I know with some slight changes to personality to fit a militaristic environment.
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Would I be one of them??? granted I havn't actually read the story yet.. Am doing so now.