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Imperator Fyron said:
I have attached a file with numerous spelling and grammatical errors fixed.
You need to pick either the American spelling of "center" or the British spelling of "centre" for the sake of consistency. Distribution Centre and Medical Center should use the same spelling of the word.
Why do intelligence facilities (especially the "bonus" ones) provide so many intelligence points?
"Agents perform training worth 700 intelligence points per cycle."
Should training really be what is providing the intelligence points?
Distribution Centre (annoying British spelling  ) ability tag might be better off saying something like this:
"Distributes resources and makes them available for use throughout the empire."
instead of:
"Distributes resources and makes them available for the empire."
Fuel Dock ability tag might be better as:
"Resupplies all vessels that dock at the planet."
instead of:
"Allows vessels to get resupplied when docking at the planet."
The reference to storing "hard," "soft" and "power" resources in the storage abilities of the resource producing facilities might be confusing.
What is "Restricted Radiationing" supposed to be? It seems that if you reduce the radioactives level, value should decrease.
Descriptions such as these in various facilities are redundant:
"Provides storage space, increases resource storage by 17500 each."
Could possibly be simplified to:
"Increases resource storage by 17500 per resource."
You might want to place the Planetary Outpost at the end of the list for that family. This will cause it to be displayed when "only latest" is enabled (or is it "hide obselete?"), and it will still upgrade properly to the Planetary Settlements and such. Take a gander at the ordering of Space Yard Expansions and the Projects in the latest Adamant files. You should also make a note that it should be built after the Space Yard, since it will not "Increase construction rate with 150 units," it will reduce construction rate to that value if there is no Space Yard on the colony.
Miscellaneous changes I made:
The Medical Center I and II had the Robotoid Factories inbetween them.
Medical Center ability description is awkward. I suggest:
"Improved health of the general population increases the system-wide reproduction rate by 7%."
Shield Generator facilities had discrepencies in the ability tags and ability values. I updated the descriptions to reflect the value of the abilities.
Shield Generator facilities had odd cloaking abilities, which I removed:
Ability 2 Type := Cloak Level
Ability 2 Descr := Increases a planets damage resistance, simulated by adding 75 shield points.
Ability 2 Val 1 := 0
Ability 2 Val 2 := 0
Robotoid Factory ability description had "in the system" added to it.
"Deep Mining Thriller" is now "Deep Mining Driller."
"each 10 cycles" in various descriptions replaced with "every 10 cycles."
Deep Mining Driller, Harvesting Robotics and Thermonuclear Reactors descriptions did not end with a period.
Cargo Warehouse III ability description changed from 17500 to the correct 22500.
"Increases construction rate with 375 units" was replaced with "Increases construction rate by 375 units."
Megalopolis construction abilities were incorrect. Its description was updated to be in line with the Settlements (ie: "units of each resource" instead of "resources each").
Also for Megalopolis, "Allows the storage 5000 resources each." fixed to be "Allows the storage 5000 resources of each type."
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Firstly, thanks a bunch for your help. Most of the point you are mentioned are right are correct / will be corrected, especially the grammar and stuff like that.
About your intelligence point question. Well i dont really care about intel, but in all the games/mods i played, weither it be off or Online intel was simply never used. I think by majorly increasing the intel-generation players might actually make one or two planets into intel-centers. Thats the plan
The reference to hard, soft and power ressources will be corrected as well.
About "Restricted Radiationing". Well actually thats one the ideas i really liked. I just didnt know how to proberly explain it.
With it i meant that certain areas (such as area surrounding a powerplant) are artifcially radiated to create a better power output. That what i meant. I was going to explain that in the facility descriptions, of which all are yet to do. If you a suggestion, tell me.
About the Robotoid Factory and the "in the system": Actually it IS in the system, as each planet gets in the increase/decrease in population. So i dont understand it should be removed. Please tell me
Anyway, thanks for your post, it really helped me alot. Most of the things you suggested will be implented/changed that way.