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Old April 8th, 2005, 12:58 PM

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Default Re: Ocelots Rampant (Game Story)
Are you willing to accept a (very!) thorough critique?

Please keep in mind that I work to a high level, such as shown here:

http://www.rpgforums.net/forumdisplay.php?f=8

And if you're wondering, should I post a story, I *DEMAND* similar treatment -- I don't just do it to others.
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