It is indeed a sort of "rough draft" as of yet. Will edit it. I only made it this short since I had to shut down the computer when I was pretty much in the middle of the story.
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Well, opinions so far? Is my style of writing terrible? Please, tell me.
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I meant this to be longer, in the sense of "Is my style of writing terrible? Are my characters less interesting than a Redshirt?" etc. but I couldn't really think of anything then, and I had to go anyway.
I like the "young Capt. Janeway" comment, hadn't thought of her that way yet
thank you for your advice
really appreciate it.
Sorry Turin, but I just wanted to execute a little self-mocking procedure. And btw, there's nothing stopping you from telling yor story at the bar