[dogscoff]

Well, you've not really written enough for us to really comment on your characters, but you've done well with the few hundred words you've used.

I like your style, and I'm extremely glad to see more fanfic breaking away from actual games- so often game-led fanfic ends up as an endless series of dull reports on routine colony ship launches and tech advances, peppered with the odd Weberesque combat description.

Looking forward to more.