Re: The Demise
Ahhh jumping in right in the middle. I also think the freestyling is good.
As for the style, I'm not the best person to ask I think, but it's good for a rough draft.
I'll pass on the Captain Janeway comparison, for I despise her with an unjustified vengance. I'm fully aware it's unjustified but can do nothing about it.
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