Thread: OT: Somebody's critique of my story
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Old May 2nd, 2005, 06:00 PM
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Default Re: OT: Somebody\'s critique of my story
See that's the thing that actually kind of confused me the most I mean granted I'm no quantum physisist but I am also not ignorant and I am religious.

But The part about being a good "light read" for "kids" is the part that hurt the most I mean I didn't think my writing was that shallow hrm.
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