OMG He doesn't quit here's his last e-mail to me (and I say last because I blocked him after this one heh)
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Hey [my name] I just read up some of the latest chapters and have to say though you improved a little I'm still not very impressed so continuing from where I left off.
24. Moving all your xeno's from planets to those sphereworlds of yours makes no sense do you have any clue how much time that would take no sane Empire would do that!
25. Uh still very stupid Admirals I mean Ross just took the chicken [censored] way out and ran away? Boy no wonder your offensive came to a hault.
26. A 17 year old Ruler of all Mankind LOL yeah great when his voice ain't squakin and he's not gushing over girls I guess he might make a good decision or two.
27. Why do your ships all have marines? sure I know it's "Tradition" but do you honestly think an SD of yours that is likely never to be borded will need Marines? I mean a fleet security team would be able to handle anything in regards to normal discipline.
28. Xenos=sub-human okay so now your guys are really starting to bug me as I read further and further into it, I mean your basically writing a story from the viewpoint of a bunch of racists and yet you portray these people as decent? And do you think after 500 years or so and your people "never" being racist against other humans-which btw is hard to beleive- they'd be racist against Extraterrestrials?
29. Sudden switcheroo? Now your 3rd fleet is on the run when before you were winning easily....gag.
30. Heh is it just me or do you throw in the occasional female admiral just to show you have women in uniform?
31. Okay Carriers....your enemies have them from what I've read, and yet....you haven't caught on?
32. I just LOVE those stormtrooper unit names, Deathwing lol what was that other one again? (okay is this a rag or is he actually complimenting me?)
33. I can still hear that star wars march playing everytime I read a your Praetor....."join the darkside luke." heh and what is up with the name change prior to Praetor he was just Rodrick, now he's Rodrick the 2nd what is he the freakin pope?
34. Last point to make for now (more like forever since i blocked your ***) the Icarans seem to view Andermanians like they do Xenos yet you haven't explained why....BIG screwup here.
Anyway I suppose I'll read some of your newer chapters and give you reviews as I go but for now..cya later.
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Heh thank God for that lovely BLOCK button with hotmail right lol
And here is my reply for you guys (though I don't care if he happens to ever find these forums and posts a pissy remark or two hehe)
24. Apparently he hasn't grasped the concept of the fact that the ICARANS are both TERRIFIED of and LOATHFUL towards Xenos and thus would want them as concentrated and isolated as possible....makes them easier to elimate should the time come.
25. BUUUUUUUURP I'm sorry what I wasn't paying attention.....okay wait I got it, this ain't star Trek Ross ain't captain Sisko and he's not going to face down a vastly superior fleet yet pull a miracle out his wazooo and win.
26. Um it's happened before.....and at much younger ages and worked out fine. And besides by time your 17 you should be over the squacky, ?gushy wtf is gushy? phase I mean I stopped squacking at 13 (the gushing over girls I just don't know what that means lol)
27. Uh again this ain't star trek and the fleet security teams ARE MARINES lol.
28. Short answer yes long answer HELL YES they can be racist against xeno's after NOT being racist against humans considering most humans don't have bright yellow skin buldging eyes or 60% cybernetic bodies.....uh Phong Xiati respectively.
And yes just because you are "racist" doesn't by default make you a bad person as it is a matter of breeding/fear that makes you racists, and it is more accurate to say they are xenephobic and not racist they have nothing against aliens just because they are aliens they have something against them because of the threat they pose to mankind.
29. Doesn't this just restate the point about retarded admirals? Yeah okay obviously he doesn't realize that wars can change very very quickly.
30. No I throw them in for the great tail factor
31. Car...ee....ur? what?
32. Again is that an insult? or a compliment I got confused.
33. Yeah Palpatine with a squacky girl gushing voice? boy your confusing.
34. BECAUSE THEY GENETICALLY ENGINEER THEIR SOLDIERS AND I'VE STATED THAT!
Anyhoo as I said he's blocked now but that was just funny this time around, I mean those aren't constructive at all just rags about the fact I don't have uber admirals or star trek/star wars things. I think he should read/watch more sci-fi before he equates everything to Star Trek/Star Wars feh.