Re: OT: Somebody\'s critique of my story
You might not like his points.... But remember this he is reading your stories. And taking the time to actually write you in the attempt to help you. Perhaps you should take these points and ask someone else who has not read your story to read it and see if they notice these things. Do something constructive with it instead of what your doing now.
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Hey GUTB where did you go...???
He is still driving his mighty armada at 3 miles per month along the interstellar highway bypass and will be arriving shortly
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