Re: OT: Somebody\'s critique of my story
Or better yet get the oppinions of people who HAVE read my story and see if they can find these problems in my story....like I did and yah know what it worked fine so far and most of his "problems" these folks have even stated are just nitpicks.
As far as his legitimate points go well then the kind folks here pointed those out as well except they also gave advice on how to fix it not just belching out insulting rhetoric.
There is a difference in pointing out errors and solutions with those errors and just pointing out pet peeves.
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