Ok,
Special Effects - Good. I think this short was all about show casing someones 3d art work abilities.
Dialog - needs a lot of extra help. Their dialog is far to contemporary and does not lend itself well to the over all sound and feel of the movie.
Acting - VERY bad! (Oscar winning "Worst Acting" award bad!) You combine the bad acting with the bad dialog and you get what we call a D movie.
"A" for effort. My hats off to them for actually making the movie. Well done folks.
