Constructive criticism no [/i]nitpicking[/i] yeah a little bit.
Okay as I have stated it's sci-fi with a few thousand years more advanced tech then us so they may pull stuff against our knowledge of physics that's cool with me so if you really want to you can write a book taking note of every physical impossibility in my sci-fi universe if you want (still not all THAT many) -or- you can do that pesky little suspension of beleif deal that is very important to sci-fi and just read enjoy and maybe pass along the occasional correction to something that may be possible but that I got the "math" wrong on.
Now end of that so that I can actually have more story, because you may or may not have noticed I've added another chapter already today and want people reading that more than
this 
Oh and I meant edit button as in your double post
so go ahead and stand by that if yah want lol