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IMHO the language should not be the main focus of critics. As long as I understand what you want to say I am very tolerant to imperfections and English is not my native language either. The alternative would be a campaign in Spanisch, French, German or whatever language the author speaks as native language. Not very reasonable IMO.
I was not able to play the second campaign much and I would like to wait with my critic till I finished it. But for me Campeador has earned a big "thank you" for the lot of work he did!