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dogscoff said:
no, uncolonized = uncolonised. You guys in the colonies ought to know that=-)
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Bah, like England isn't a colony herself. Granted, that's a colony that went loose a few centuries ago and that worked up a lot of mischief. Still, you owe us allegiance, obedience, submission, respect and so on and so forth. Trust me on that one.
Something actually productive: there is an extra "you" near the end of the text (last paragraph but one), where you speak about maintenance on remote-mining not mining anything. Still in that area, you might also wish to add something about checking once in a while whether the miners actually produce more resources than they use up.
You may want to add that supplies are irrelevant for remote-mining, even when used on ships. It will drain supplies from the vessel, but not having any supply does not prevent remote-mining from working.