Re: OT: Hell is For Heroes.
Puke, thanks for pointing out the scruffy continuity. I've fixed it up, fortified Kagan's constitution by having him wake up a bit earlier, and thrown in a little explanation of why Saraea didn't do anything about the lights. Of course, what she was really up to is for her to know and you to wonder.
Hunpecked, you don't want to know.
No, really. You don't.
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