[cshank2]

Thanks, Dog. I'll touch it up when I get some time. The Order will be explained in the next chapter, and the planet is practically all barbarian except for a few places and maybe one or two cities that have formed.

The flickering great spirits... yeah... That didn't sound good when I was writing it, but I meant the stars. Most ancient civilizations thought of the stars as ancestor-spirits and everything.

The rest will be explained... when it's finished! Hrf.