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Old January 15th, 2007, 06:26 AM
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Default Re: A Tale of Men AAR

Great writing, I enjoyed it very much.

As for pointers, well, I think attacking R'lyeh was a mistake. The starting location was really bad, though. A different pretender design would probably work better.
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