[llamabeast]

This looks good. I have to agree with Endo that the wing colours look a bit psychedelic though. They're not the same style of colours as the dominions art in general. For example, normal Caelians are meant to have white wings, but because of the shading the pixels aren't actually very close to white. Similarly look at a priest's robes - you know they're white, but the colours used are darker, which gives a more realistic look and allows for more contrast.

Unfortunately I haven't had a chance yet to think about more than just the graphics, I'll try to take a look soon if I get a chance.