[Amos]

The Nazar Goz spell description reads to me like you didn't finish it?

You think so? What else do you think should it say?

"sacrament of (the) Unlife" (if a proper noun)

Thats the correct one. Unlife is both a concept and a noun.

You treat a bunch of things as given names (i.e. "A caster animates Yigin Seri" vs "A caster animate an Yigin Seri", as to "Someone shot a Man" vs "Someone shot DrPraetorious"). Is that on purpose? Should also probably be "The Caster" instead of "A Caster", or something flowery like "The Master of Unlife ...."

I'll probably go through the mod fixing all those when I find time for it. I dont see the principal difference between "A Caster" and "The Caster". Depends on how you read the statement.

There are also some punctuation mistakes.

I'm anarchistic when it comes to punctuation .

does he have eyes on spikes on his back?

Thats skulls.