Thanks Cor. If I had to give away presents at my birthday, I would stay at home and lurk the forums too.
Oh there was a lich? I didn't notice that...
That would be a cool novel. As it is now, you can't tell who's the good guy and who's the bad guy. The honorable kingdom of Man meddle in necromancy and opening the doors to the Tartarus to get rid of the things that should not be. Do they try to defeat evil by an even bigger evil? How do they get rid of the Tartarians after the war is won?
Yes, Bogus died a swift and messy death. If your Tartarians would die as quick, I would be at ease.