March 9th, 2008, 12:25 PM
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Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: Japan
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Re: In-Game Typos
There's a random event with some spelling and grammar mistakes:
"People here are very unruly and have destroyed valuable equipment that is neccessary for us. Repairs costed 200 gold."
I'd suggest:
"People here are very unruly and have destroyed valuable and essential equipment. Repairs cost 200 gold."
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