[darloth]

I can't find an edit button (edit: Ahh, it appears to be one of those high tech eventually-disappearing edit buttons) so I'll just have to make a new post.

I missed "beats" even though the thread has pointed it out twice, because of course beats is a real word so the spellchecker skipped it. More importantly, I changed thraldom into thralldom, which I shouldn't have done as that's an item name and would break anyone who expected to start with it. So, a couple of slight changes later, and new one. Oops ^_^