A little bit better, but it still doesn't have that "oomph" that the other 2 do.
I just got a flash of inspiration from comparing both versions though - if he had 4 eyes - 2 where you moved them, and 2 where they started, he would begin to develop a really horrifying visage.
And actually, if he were just a slightly darker tint, he'd look less "Puffy", ironically.
