Re: The Recently Discovered Journals of the Legendary Desle
If you have a minute, correct the typo right at the start, "our despicably enemies". It just bugged me, sorry.
Other than that, it was flipping awesome. The setting and potential atmosphere of Dominions is one of the reasons I like it so much, so it was fantastic to see it explored well in a piece of good writing like this.
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