Here's to breaking up chains of self-replying!
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-Early in the story ppl said that Othaglot was useless and Cane was doing all the clever stuff. Has that been turned around now? I want it to swing back and forth.
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Definitely. Now that he's back in his element (police work, interrogating criminals), Othy's doing quite well.
It's almost as if they've switched bodies 
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-Is there too much emphasis on "background knowledge?"
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Seems fine to me. The background needed for the plot points comes pretty naturally, and seems fairly obvious in hindsight.