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Old March 10th, 2003, 04:42 PM
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Default Re: Othaglot and Cane - Story Thread
dogscoff, it was just some helpful critiquing. I will be happy if the author is happy.

I love the chapter. The fact that they have no real clue as to where she is, is exccellent!

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