Re: Conceptual Balance Mod 1.41
A few things I noticed while looking through:
1) Green dragon is in twice, once lines 170-176 (with stealthy), one in "monsters" lines 251-259 (no stealthy)
2) Armor for lord of war is commented (line 554). Purposeful?
3) 3228 --> mackaka ==> machaka (this typo is actually throughout the entire section on this nation)
4) Ulm hero "the locksmith" - desc speaks of great age. Might want to reflect in stat block.
5) line 7044 - "MR" --> "mr"
6) 7106, maverni "Champion of the Horn" hero seems to be added as a pretender; is this right?
7) 7715-7720 - the creature 2829 created here is not used. Perhaps it should be another multihero for early Oceania?
8) 8061-8074 - The red tengu is not added as a hero/multihero; should the mods here be in the hero section, or somewhere else?
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