Ano, there's a slight issue with the Wyrm and the Manticore (not so much the manticore as Gandalf can handle the paths on that). Our rubric states that no pretender may take more than level 3 in any path not native to it. The Wyrm has no native paths. Thus strictly speaking the Wyrm would be limited to level 3 in all paths including death. If you read it wrong, you might think you could use it to bypass the primary path restrictions. I can either drop the Wyrm or adjust the wording to ensure there's no more than level 3 in any factions primary path.
I encourage anyone who's not yet signed up for the forums to make use of them. Again, not mandatory but probably helpful.
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