F Te antKe:
Primitive likes to "earn" his money, so he will only accept your credits if he can have his fun first.
You might wanna give them to David instead.
David:
Twas the first poem that could use some more verses.
The second had a perfect ending: "I buy the house a round of drinks."
And the spinning world avatar is very cool, but maybe the world is spinning a little to fast, and the reflextion in the globe look a little weird.