[Imp]

For me your descriptions are generaly good enough, if you wanted could post a picture of deployment & plan at the start of the battle. Dont really think it needs more than that unless somebody does something truly heroic & you want to show it.
Rays look like he uses paintnet which is a free download & you can use any number of screen capture utilities.
If you think it will effect your writing style leave it you have a good little following so unless a lot of people ask why bother.