November 22nd, 2002, 09:10 PM
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Re: Hevordah Imperium - Story thread - Updated 6-13-03!
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I put in italics what I added.
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 Curiouser and curiouser...
The first time I read Chapter 3, there was only one bulleted list. None of the text from
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We could finally see whether or not Qullum Sr. was right about this stuff. We owe him that much for dedicating his life to this project.
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through
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Here are a few details of this Station:
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was there before, and the next sentence after the bulleted list was
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The crowd then once again applauded Qullum.
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It looks to me like your italics are only about 1/8th of what I thought was missing before.
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"Good morning, Pooh Bear," said Eeyore gloomily. "If it is a good morning," he said. "Which I doubt," said he.
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