rags, I didn't need the bump!
I think that there is a place for you in
SI-FI writing. Seriously! All have been very good reads. But this surpasses them. The tension on the station between the Capt. and XO, very very nice touch! Don't get me wrong,
ALL of the story was,
great. That aspect, just jumped out at me.
WHEW!
shoot I am going to go read it again! Damn, that is good!
mlmbd 
